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Open Poetry #35

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Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

0 posted 2005-04-11 06:59 PM

i have dreamed of blue nights
of blue awakenings

of drowned men
and women

the laughing swell of the sea

yes, it mocks me
it deafens me

then the tide hurls
backward

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (04-11-2005 07:54 PM).]

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2005-04-11 07:24 PM

Maree

"i have dreamed of blue nights
of blue awakenings"

I have too...it is frightening.

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2005-04-11 07:25 PM

Yes I can understand the words

Something of the maelstrom stuff I wrote I will publish as part of this comment

Dave

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2005-04-11 07:27 PM

enjoyed

Alicia
Member

since 2002-03-22

Posts 279

4 posted 2005-07-01 03:50 PM

oh! this, so sharp and yet, so achy tired too to me...wow. you are good.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2005-07-01 06:44 PM

yes it does seem that way

both embracing then abandonning me
in the same breath

yep youre good....o so good

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

6 posted 2005-07-01 06:48 PM

A lovely write Marie. Nice to see you. You look lovely.

"fit to be tied"

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