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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2005-04-11 03:02 PM

UsDreams

palm reading;
every scent filled line
remains yours
hours away
slip into our home until
we bleed the sunrise

©sdt'05
shadorma #2

"i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly"

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-04-11 03:10 PM

The graphics you use compliment your poetry, but still,
your poetry stands perfect without graphics.
Love your stuff Lady Snow. Hugs.

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2005-04-11 06:58 PM

Dang where you been? Gilr I swear Your never around. Loved you poem

Love
JUJU

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

3 posted 2005-04-12 02:02 AM

GS.... if it won't work without the art, then i'm not doing it right. so i thank you very much for what you said !!!

JUJU, i've been around .. sort of hon in and out. not writing too many new ones at the moment as i'm really focused on my book atm.... oh god, i said it outloud. lol. anyway... thank you so much for reading.
snow

"i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly"

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

4 posted 2005-04-12 04:36 AM

This was better than the first one for me ...thank you snow...always enjoy reading your wisdom..

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

5 posted 2005-06-14 09:00 PM

Right you are....publishing a poem with a picture gives a special responsibility -- to be sure both the poem and the picture can stand alone.....you do both, admirably.

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2005-06-14 10:07 PM

this...beautiful

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