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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Touching looking often inwards perhaps I do watch days in a haze of ideas and aspirations that need to attract some attention that I must asked myself, do I want or need Touching ideas of women men a to b, b to a, c on a and b does it spell alphabet in words forgotten when words weren't forgotten valuing ideas music imagination written on images that you never thought about Touching the forgotten power that sought to seek freedom to transform countries and not the few that seek control transforming knowledge to power for few enriching few deciding on few and succoured to few Touching minds bodies realities because someone can not understand that the little they settle for could be so much more Never a day goes by But I wonder how the race, we call human, survives as it does |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
I can not presume to exactly answer your question "how does it survive?" but to say for how much longer can it? |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Interesting write this part struck me "Touching minds bodies realities because someone can not understand that the little they settle for could be so much more " |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This is a really great write Dave...almosy haunting in the way it stays with you...lingering for several moments after the read. Eric |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sighing |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
adagio I can not presume to exactly answer your question "how does it survive?" but to say for how much longer can it? Thanks for your words and the obvious statement is "we are working on it". D.Lester Young Interesting write this part struck me "Touching minds bodies realities because someone can not understand that the little they settle for could be so much more " So much talent we squander and we always hit the wrong way to release it because we base it upon ourselves. Ericc This is a really great write Dave...almosy haunting in the way it stays with you...lingering for several moments after the read. Eric Thanks Eric - it might need to stay with us for longer than we think unless we turn around the knowledge train passing shadows sighing Passing Dave |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
yes another great one ~ makes a person think~ i like it when they do that~ My spirit will rise |
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time prophet Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 371In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees |
The human race is but a work in progress we shall never see the completion of simply the destruction thereof. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Sometimes David....little is all a person has since born, and so, what would they have to compare better to? Tremendous write, enjoyed this a lot...thank you |
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