Open Poetry #35 |
Something Nicer |
DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
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Wind was moving in the trees caressing Sun with a breeze gently moving overhead listening to words that thread amongst a gentle afternoon quietly moving into tune of an evening often bassoon but harp decorated in As bodies break from the straights dancing until stays will break on a quite image of grace where words often said as 'grace' Honouring a woman must misplaced Who decorating life With Grace As sacrificial dressed to the nines Forced into season in their time Matched and bred as if the pen Had broken open Mayhem began With the open pen that spread and words spread until the dread of ink blushes a small sink stained by innermost thoughts and fears that have fuelled so many years and blighted others into tears as echoing the words of fear You give the gateway to the one you have kept Dear |
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Sunshine
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Something nicer, indeed... I liked the sound of this, Dave... it resonates... |
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DavePage Member Elite
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Sunshine I never like to say this to a woman but you are quick Dave |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Dave, I can safely say that that's been said before. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Indeed, that poem was "Something Nicer" and I found myself swept away by its continuous flow. Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I enjoy your poems Dave |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
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Anymore of this from you lot and I will start thinking I can write Many thanks for your words Dave |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
much nicer very much enjoyed! |
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