nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
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2005-04-11
10:37 AM
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And When She Wakes
The sunshine peeks through slatted blinds. While eyes deceive, the empty finds A melody of thoughts before, When darkness held the more of more. The quiet peace, the pillows hold Left imprints there, in satin fold. To lift the head, to raise the day In anchored thought of interplay. So tossed the weight, in warmth to rise, A smile to greet the lines of, traced. In mirrored view those hazeled eyes Serenity, this day embraced. Studying of the face before. Opening of the once closed door. Allowing touch to heal the pain Trusting in the feel again. Forgotten dreams, tomorrow's here When night returns and time is near. In silence, words extend to you Of when she wakes to thoughts of two...
M"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss)
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bslicker
Member Elite
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321
state of mind
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2005-04-11
10:41 AM
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the opening of the mind's doors. good write M Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. Bernie Slicker
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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
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2005-04-11
10:44 AM
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Thank you Bernie
The sun is shining and Spring is finally here ( although slightly chilly today) hugs M
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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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2005-04-11
10:53 AM
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yes, the sun is shining, enjoy it M. Hugs.
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DavePage
Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917
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2005-04-11
12:53 PM
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M
You just keeping hitting new highs
This is brilliant
Dave
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HopeS
Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
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2005-04-11
01:11 PM
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Gave a wonderful sunshiny spring feeling
Hope
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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
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2005-04-11
01:38 PM
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oh, a happy heart indeed
beautiful write
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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
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2005-04-11
01:45 PM
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As fresh as a spring daisy!
Linda
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