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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2005-04-11 07:50 AM

Caught Afoul

I feel afoul, caught in let
In shadowed mist mosquito net
One I can’t dismiss with ease
One that weighs you down in tease

It forms a veil upon the sun
The weight of dew is still undone
And shadows lay in heavy stay
That stops the making of the day

And I am cold the lack of light
To bake my bones to make them right
To focus on the mornings awe
To let the light within the door

For I must lift my head like grass
I cannot breathe when shadows pass
I am a creature of the sun
Without it, I am undone

I’ll wait for it as best I can
For I am but a simple man

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2005-04-11 08:52 AM

"I am a creature of the sun
Without it, I am undone"

Me too dear Sy...me too!

Good morning and hope yours is as sunny
as the one up here in Ontario.
It's a glorious spring day..
one to smile about.
~Morning smiles, hugs & tea, Nancy~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2005-04-11 09:30 AM

not so simple a man...
I love the sunshine too...and we have finally had a few days of it.

M

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

3 posted 2005-04-11 10:40 AM

very nice
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2005-04-11 11:03 AM

Let's burn that mist that holds the man
So that he may find his Neverland...

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2005-04-11 11:37 AM

Sy

I am a creature of the sun too...and without it sometimes it is difficult to raise the morning. It is bright here...I'll send you some by dove.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2005-04-11 01:58 PM

For I must lift my head like grass
I cannot breathe when shadows pass
I am a creature of the sun
Without it, I am undone

I’ll wait for it as best I can
For I am but a simple man

definitely a morning man, you are
good morning Sy

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2005-04-11 02:03 PM

Hi, Sigh Guy!

Hmmm! I wonder what type of grass ye be referring to?!? lol

~ and BTW, this "angel" prefers a "simple" man over a complicated one!

EA

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2005-04-12 08:19 AM

At least you know what causes your malaise... and are willing to admit it. *S*

I like this very much, my friend... may your world soon be brightened!!

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

9 posted 2005-04-12 10:13 AM

caught in let
In shadowed mist mosquito net

what a wonderful couplet!

Corinne

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