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Open Poetry #35

Keep Going Scott

Sun of faith
Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 101

0 posted 2005-04-09 08:06 PM

Walking that path again,
The one leading to such positive energy.
Striding so strong and proud,
Pushing all little bits of evil away.

The horizon shines so bright.
My eyes set on continuing my re-birth.
I will not surrender myself,
To the always lurking control of the unknown.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2005-04-09 09:40 PM

A writer tells a story over time...snap shots into the thoughts and heart...as resident.

Superb images, familiar and clear...let it flow, in the rhythm of the unknown. What we don't know is the catalyst for new creation, absent of the rules that once blocked our way.

Brought out a smile in me.
Beam me up Scotty!
TD

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2005-04-10 06:27 PM

I enjoyed the positive feel of this!

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2005-06-17 11:12 AM

Sometimes the unknown is very scary. This reminds me of 'Walking Tall' the movie.

Enjoyed.

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

4 posted 2005-06-17 11:51 AM

Powerful, heartfelt emotions fill these words touching those who read them...*hugs*

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

5 posted 2005-06-17 03:42 PM

good write. I will keep an eye out (;

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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