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Open Poetry #35

In Present Endeavor

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2005-04-09 06:05 PM

In Present Endeavor

I suppose part of
the reason I
find it so hard
to believe in love
is due to the
opportunities that
I squandered and
in doing so I
contributed to
loves failure.

Although now I
clearly see my
failures, and in
present endeavors
I am determined
to do my part.

JamesLee
April08
2005

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2005-04-09 06:15 PM

It's good when we can see and admit where we went wrong..
and then to move on from there.
Good for you James!
hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2005-04-09 06:18 PM

Thank you Enchantress for the nice words...I am glad when I can clearly see my faults...although it was not always only my failure...I can only make corrections on my side...James

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-04-09 06:58 PM

Oh how true..how very true.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-04-09 07:37 PM

as long as you learn from mistakes and try to not make them again...yes

nice write

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2005-04-09 08:27 PM

Very nice James. hugs, Chris

"The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze."
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

6 posted 2005-04-11 03:30 PM

I agree, it is good when we can see and admit where we went wrong. Well written too!

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

7 posted 2005-04-11 06:42 PM

very nice here

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2005-04-11 07:29 PM

good read

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