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Open Poetry #35

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DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2005-04-08 05:33 PM

We moved in hesitation as embers of fire matched between our bones matching not in the way we thought or intended sinews to bind

In essence we took the skin from our bodies flaying it for all to see our pact in misunderstanding place position attitude pride

In the beat of a rhymth that echoes vibration we resonate

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2005-04-08 09:51 PM

Interesting Dave. I like this. Chris

"The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze."
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

longte
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since 2005-04-06

Posts 199
Australia

2 posted 2005-04-08 09:52 PM

Very Different to my style of writing
But also very clear

Live It

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2005-04-08 10:06 PM

The words seem to flow and they still are, which means I will be in trouble for over-posting.

I appreciate my style is different but your style and love and life are yours, no-one elses.

I do have a problem in writing the same way all the same time and that is probably because I want to challenge another thought or way or meaning or how it might be read.

Maybe clouds got in my way and something is lost and gained in every day.

Stolen from Clouds.

Thanks

Dave

WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

4 posted 2005-04-09 02:35 PM

This is very interesting; well crafted too!

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

5 posted 2005-04-10 11:54 AM

Thanks Windwalker

Dave

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