Open Poetry #35 |
Just a Word or Two |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Loneliness creeps in, the warmth of surrounding arms lacking just as the height of body, looking down upon me. A mind reaching far into the depths of memory needing a moment or two of cornering those feelings. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"A mind reaching far into the depths of memory needing a moment or two" ah and here I am having too many of those moments |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Loneliness creeps in, the warmth of surrounding arms lacking a hard moment of truth, hopefully to pass as fast as it came to light |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Loneliness creeps in, the warmth of surrounding arms lacking just as the height of body, looking down upon me. At one time, I knew that feeling verrry well. Are you sure you're not my twin? sadie |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*feeling this* |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Susan...moments like that sometimes last too long Michele...everything passes eventuallyme to light Donna...thanks Sadie, don't think you are my twin. I only had one sister Dixie...I knew you would feel this. M |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
This one just leaves me here with a sigh!! "A spring shower was cause to run |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
m...like the new pic...you ARE a beauty |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Helen...that is me on a good day M |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
You and I, both! [This message has been edited by SmartChick (04-16-2005 10:01 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hi Sue...we just have to keep plodding along...we are both due you know hugs M |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
You write some really good stuff Dave |
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Italy Angel Member
since 2003-09-01
Posts 65Northern Ca |
Short and to the point. Very nice. |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
very heartful i know this feeling as well. Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and it is those memories, which keep us adrift with an invisible compass...well needed glorious memories.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Understanding this very well and sending heart hugs your way. Love the new pic! For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
well..I am surprised at the many nice comments...know that I appreciate them all. And if I sometimes take my time in responding..."things" are beginning to get busy for me and taking up my time in a good way Thanks again M |
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