Seymour Tabin
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2005-04-07
07:35 AM
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The Embrace
I love to touch embrace her face Within my mind of rose and lace I would the atom of this Eve I would the Eden I believe
These are the bells that ring my mind This is the church that I would find This is the phantom of my goal This is the spirit of my soul
She lives in fantasy and seem She is the all within my dream She is the song within my heart She is the echo and the start
To me she is pure poignancy The agony and ecstasy The atom in its time of run Until it turns back into one
She is the firefly at night She is the essence of my sight
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Janet Marie
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2005-04-07
07:51 AM
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I love to touch embrace her face Within my mind of rose and lace I would the atom of this Eve I would the Eden I believe
These are the bells that ring my mind This is the church that I would find ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ She is the echo and the start ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The atom in its time of run Until it turns back into one ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Sy, Sy *SIGH*
there are so many cool lines in this...I cant help but smile at your wile. I love the symbolism and personifi in this cadence kissed romantic declaration.
Within my mind of rose and lace
oh and what an Eden it tis.
The atom in its time of run Until it turns back into one
and that couplet is cooler than I have words for.
I do so love the way your mind blooms. *S*
*ww*
It's only words and words are all I have to take your heart away.
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LeeJ
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2005-04-07
08:11 AM
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this embrace of yours to her, is a wealth beyond any imagination...this is what blooms flowers and smiles rainbows...
Lovely
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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
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2005-04-07
09:12 AM
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Ah how lovely this is Sy! Your lady love will be pleased with this beauty. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~For it was not into my ear you whispered But into my heart It was not my lips you kissed But my soul
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Nightshade
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just out of reach
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2005-04-07
10:45 AM
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Beautiful Seymour !! Hugs, Chris"The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze." Gustavo Adolfo Becquer
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WindWalker
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2005-04-07
11:17 AM
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I like the symbolism in this poem; this is well written too!
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Margherita
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Eternity
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2005-04-07
01:04 PM
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Oh, dear Seymour, what a delight to read. Your heart is as fresh as dew in the morning sun. Truly beautiful! Love, Margherita
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passing shadows
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displaced
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2005-04-07
01:32 PM
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a wonderful Springy write
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SEA
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with you
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2005-04-07
08:28 PM
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my goodness it's been too long since I've read you... this is wonderful Seymour
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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
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2005-04-07
09:54 PM
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Sy, your poems are always such a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing them.
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Sadelite
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2005-04-07
11:08 PM
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You paint her so beautifully, Sy.
sadie
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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
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2005-04-08
09:18 AM
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JM, I love the way you pick the creams out of the box of chocolates. LOL WW
LeeJ You are a love, have a happy friday.
Nancy, Thank you sweet.
Chris, Thank you love. Hugs.
WindWalker Thank you so much.
Margherita You are a love.
passing, Thank you sweet.
SEA So nice to see you here, thank you.
SmartChick Thank you my dear.
sadie Thank you so much.
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adagio
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2005-04-08
01:25 PM
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lucky you!
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Seymour Tabin
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2005-04-08
02:28 PM
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adagio Thank you.
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Beki
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2005-04-10
02:47 AM
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"To me she is pure poignancy The agony and ecstasy The atom in its time of run Until it turns back into one
She is the firefly at night She is the essence of my sight"
very nice!
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Seymour Tabin
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2005-04-10
07:22 AM
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Beki Thank you so much.
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Marge Tindal
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2005-04-10
09:55 AM
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Seymour~ I came looking for a Spring bouquet of beauty ... and I found it~
'She is the firefly at night She is the essence of my sight'
*smiles* ... just last evening I watched the fireflies dance the lawn~
*HUGLETS* to you and your lady~ ~*Marge*~
~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, the spirit rejoices over what it has left. - Sufi epigram <))><
Email noles1@totcon.com
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Seymour Tabin
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2005-04-10
10:01 AM
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Marge, You are a sweetheart.
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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
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2005-04-10
10:25 AM
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Good morning, Sweet Sonneteer!
Your spirit is, well, ~ full of spirit!
The body may age, but the vitality and beauty of the you of you, will be forever young!
A lovely read from lovely you!
Love & Light, EA
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