Open Poetry #35 |
I watch you from afar |
RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
I watch you from afar, From within the dark, Your in every dream, You are everything, I've held you within my heart- Till the light takes you from my arms I'm lost, i don't know where you are. My tears show that i feel, Makes me know that i'm real, Even when i feel that i can't go on, I know you'd want me to stay and be strong- Know that i love you. Heaven's all i see, Within my dreams, You are everything, My missing piece, Hand in hand let us make a scene- Only one chance lets not waste a thing. Even when i feel that i can't go, I know you'd want me to stay and be strong- Know that i love you, I've held you within my heart- Till the light takes you from my arms I'm lost, you know that i need you. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
You've captured an essence in your words. Dave |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Love flows deeper than the depths of the great oceans...as does your own within this. A good job of expressing it. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Would feel great to be needed so much, loved so much...tender love here! you are so romantic! ~love and hugs ~ARH We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
such a loving heart and soul~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Even when i feel that i can't go on, I know you'd want me to stay and be strong- How beautiful, dear Lee! Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very romantic |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Beautiful write! ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
such a heart beat! |
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