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Trivial (Revisited) |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle 
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Trivial Cool waters speak French while pebbles tan to the reality burn. Her fantasies are frivolous, composing done-before songs reeking of mock sighs. The canopied glow of candles creeps over his charm and canticles hail their free reign. Suffer consequences with no boundaries? Hear the cadence of gentle beats in lazy waving-- Easy comes the crest. Her fingers splay their confession while winds compose ripples of cheek-warmed highs. "Mon Cheri" She closes her eyes to the conjuring, to the compelling Live! Live! The futility in his voice is unmistaken; the encompassing illconformity. "Trivial," he signs dismissively. I bought my share of mistakes so I might see some interest. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
hi Chanson...good to see you! I liked this, especially the impact of the last two lines. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
There is certainly nothing trivial about this composure. Very nicely written, such a good ending. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Suffer consequences with no boundaries? hmmm... great line there, Dorene have missed reading you  M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
where have you been? you've been missed lady! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Fascinating read. Much enjoyed. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Martie, it's very nice to see you too. Magnus, I am happy you enjoyed. M, I've missed you too. passing shadows, I've been enjoying all the poems in lurk mode. iliana, thank you. Thank you all for the read. |
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