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Beki
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since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

0 posted 2005-04-06 03:24 AM

from black seashadows
pier lights gild night's breaking tide,
wavesong soothes my heart

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-04-06 03:43 AM

very good

enjoyed

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

2 posted 2005-04-06 09:38 AM

Hmmmm......guessing.....the point, around 18th street, on a calm, overcast night? Maybe north around 26th, but my inner eye says south.....

Either way, this feels so very real -- nicely done!

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Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2005-04-06 09:45 AM

Very nice Beki. Enjoyed. Chris

"The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze."
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2005-04-06 10:27 AM

hmmm..yes...something about the water...

I need to spend more time out at the beach..

Thank you for the reminder.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2005-04-06 10:32 AM

wading waist high in an old friend....
love the beach as well....

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

6 posted 2005-04-06 10:42 AM

Thanks for reading friends...I have had a really tough couple of days and needed to reconnect with the ocean to calm my troubled heart -- nothing works as well.

Ed you are good I was just south of 15th St! It was Newport Pier---but it could have been said as well of Balboa if I was down by 26th.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2005-04-06 01:36 PM

Very nicely done and much enjoyed Beki!

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2005-04-06 02:33 PM

Beki, thank you for putting me there for a peaceful moment. It was so soothing that I am going back for another read.

Beautifully done!!!

Linda

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2005-04-07 08:36 AM

that sound the tires make on the pier..

is the same here..can you hear it beki..come closer

enjoyed this photo

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2005-04-07 08:39 AM

These are always so very clever...
Enjoyed this, Miss Beki...

Beki
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since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

11 posted 2005-04-09 03:10 AM

again, my thanks to all of you...

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