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Jeremiad II
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Jeremiad II |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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What? You ask for faith in thee? after what you did to me? You stole away a third of "we"-- pruning too relentlessly you felled the tree and then left me all alone with all of this these branches of my peopled bliss the lack the silence wordlessness the prices that we pay we pray monotoning pretenses tell me if it's all a lie or is that more of mystery and the faith of mustard seeds in a resin necklace kept? Now you go to hell I say it's your creation anyway as witnessed by the evidence of what is left behind designed to temper me as if assigned pain is for my betterment... and oh it is convenient that Job would write a book and say God is great and God is good but I see the shadows of the seasons as they pass. I laugh thinking that she died of Spring as if it were complicity hardening my heart. Y'see? Faith is something someone prays whenever someone feels the lack of the gift of surety Faith is just another tack I remove from my bare foot dancing on the graves. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I'm sorry... if anyone takes offense, it's okay with me to remove it. I'm just so angry...I am sorry.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karen? ....I understand your anger. It's okay..I know it must hurt so bad.  I love you, Nance |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karen I understand too....you know I do. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
it's ok m'love, you just write it out. love you and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
You have every right to vent Karen. The loss of a loved one strikes deep. Hugging you, Chrislane |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Surely cannot blame you for being angry, Karen. I am just so sorry for your loss, for your family's loss, for her children's loss. Sometimes it would make it easier if we could understand the grand plan, wouldn't it. I pray for some measure of peace for you and your family and for the hole that's in your hearts to be filled up in time. I know, no prayers of those kind allowed..... foobahhh... I'm going to pray it anyway. ....jo |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
hugs. take offense? i was cheering you on.give him hell..or rather, give it back. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Karen?... You have nothing to apologize for... It's real...and it's understandable... Love you bunches, lady... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You have a venue for your anger that most people are denied. Use it...spew it... not only we, but He understands... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Words that I have felt and said more than once. Sis. And speaking of sisters, I must call my younger sister tonight, as I found out Sunday eve that she is 'in remission' and I didn't even know she was being treated! We are not close as you were to your sister. My family, btw, still calls me Kathy, which I changed many years ago to Kacy because it sounded 'stronger' to me than Kathy, at a time when I needed great physical and emotional stamina. Now, I know the name didn't really matter, only my attitude and perspective determined my pathway. Hugging you, saying there is absolutely nothing offensive in this cathartic write. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I have a worthless brother... it shames me to know I share anything with him... I don't think I'd waste my spit if he was on fire. *S* But in the sibling lottery, I got more than balance for the bro... I won the jackpot. *S* And when I think of losing her I feel "You stole away a third of "we"--" to the very bone. I envy anyone who doesn't understand this anger... for they've never lost anyone... they've never screamed "WHY????"... they've never known grief. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
just more hugs M |
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