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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-04-04 07:06 PM

I wore:

the sheerness of my words
the naked of my heart
a rhyme within a scheme
the aching when apart

the once before in eyes
that seek the gentle touch
a love song in the making
the trust of wanting such.

I seek it there, within the limbs
for you whose voice I hear,
in the now and of beyond
a finger's trace sincere

across the soft of night time's reach
when sun has lost its set
till in the morning hours of,
the wind does not forget

the drifting of the words one writes
within the shadow's hold,
that warms the chill of faded day
when loving does unfold.

I wear:

a poem in the wind
to drift the scent on course
the breeze to float a kiss
of lips to reinforce

the sheerness of these words
to sing inside your head
to fill the night with dreams
beyond your lonely stead.

******

And now you have your poem
in whisper words of rhyme.
A blending of the light to dark
or dark to light...in time.

M
Gloom inspired

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

1 posted 2005-04-04 07:56 PM

Superb

Dave

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2005-04-04 07:59 PM

*smiling*

I'm going to hug you now--and I am going to hug you very hard.

You are such the lady, Maureen. You are like muffins hot from the oven.

home

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-04-04 08:12 PM

glad you got inspired

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2005-04-04 08:18 PM

I wear:

a poem in the wind

~*~

And thus, it is...
and will be...

Amen.

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

5 posted 2005-04-04 10:51 PM

great
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

6 posted 2005-04-04 11:30 PM

the once before in eyes
that seek the gentle touch
a love song in the making
the trust of wanting such.

i loved this whole thing.
i love how the words fell together and melded.
wonderful.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2005-04-04 11:38 PM

What a beautiful, beautiful write!

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2005-04-05 02:25 AM

across the soft of night time's reach
when sun has lost its set
till in the morning hours of,
the wind does not forget

There is so much to like Maureen, but that verse says it all, to me.

Just beautiful, you~

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

9 posted 2005-04-05 04:51 AM

Very good writing M...thank you

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

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