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James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

0 posted 2005-02-17 03:07 PM

                                            When Is Enough?

haunting,
      old words come
            around      again
                                        inflict
                     themselves,
                                                    wound.
                                 was the
                                                                  harm,
                                           the fun of
                                                                             hurting
                                                       not
                                                                                           enough
                                                                   for you
                                                                                                        then?
                                                                                when is
                                                                                                                    enough?
                                                                                              when?

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2005-02-17 03:23 PM

Jamies

This feels so sad....almost like the feelings I am having right now. And, I don't know the answer, so if you find out, let me know, huh?

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2005-02-17 03:45 PM

I can feel the sadness in this piece. Awesome write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2005-02-17 04:11 PM

Oh... what beautiful sadness you write...

But an answer may be as elusive as answers to questions like why can't there be peace... agendas get in the way of caring about another's suffering... or people develop tunnel vision and think their view is the only one.... or annihilation becomes a solution. *S*

Excellent, thought-provoking write!!!

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

4 posted 2005-02-17 04:14 PM

Great write James...very creative!

Eric

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