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Mud Bath
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Mud Bath |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Mud Bath Some days I wallow in the mud With temperature the same as blood It covers me from head to toe With all the things I do not know Some days the mud is clear as glass But it is false just paste or strass And I am left to wash again A covers Ying that has no Yen It’s every morn I take a bath And start upon a bran new path Collect the flowers of the day And smell the roses on the way I follow rainbows made of dew The ones I see the same as you And rest within the valley’s green Just waiting with my lovely Queen She baths with me the same as I Which brings a tear to stay my eye? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Some days I wallow in the mud With temperature the same as blood ======================= could those lines be any cooler? So Randy is making mud pies huh? Cant have a dirty dragon tracking up the place... lol I better run a bubble bath for those feet of clay  Good Monday morning Sy-babers.  *ww*    It's only words and words are all I have to take your heart away. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Jm, "It's only words and words are all I have to take your heart away." *WW* Randy |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lovely mud, Sy... and did I glimpse a twinkling eye?    |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Collect the flowers of the day And smell the roses on the way" ~ A sure recipe for making the mud as clear as glass! I do believe that you must smell many a rose!  A very beautiful and creative write, Sir Sigh! ~ May you have a glorious day with your queen! Love & Spring Light, EA  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sounds inviting I'll settle for my hot tub though |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write! Eric |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine No it was mud caught in my eye. Earth Angel Thank you dear and here's mud in your eye. LOL passing That sounds good to me. Ericc Thank you my friend. |
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