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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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breathless banjos who wore the gloves when strumming under a half can of moon and unholy velvet the metal songs ooze down asphalt rivers no cliffs to dive from but the drinking man tries in wingless flight forgiven plays backwards so the ending hurts more than the beginning but is soon forgotten when the moths eat holes in the happily ever after ________________ dark scribblenote: john paul, you are the second rip..who will follow? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
forgiven plays backwards so the ending hurts more than the beginning but is soon forgotten when the moths eat holes in the happily ever after -------------------------------- OH SURE... the moths get blamed for everything.  uniquely YOU tribute poet sir... It's only words and words are all I have to take your heart away. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
forgiven plays backwards so the ending hurts more ~*~ The touch is felt... |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
can feel the shadow in this - the dark of passing - thanks for the view D - the look of your perspective -  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
I can feel the shadow in this too: I like the imagery in this, and the word crafting! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool, as always |
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