Open Poetry #35 |
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Wailing For The Dead (a repost for a friend) |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows ![]() |
When the cold winds of winter blow the sun from my soul and thick clouds of night swirl around me, when I reach out for warmth when I stagger and fall, why, tell me why are you sleeping? I need you to remind me, to throw a cue from the lights; it's just the time of my life that betrays me alone and frightened of noise in the night; it's just the winds outside the doors of time that blow cold visions through cracks in my soul to leave me in shadows with no where to hide, but I forget, tell me why are you sleeping? You know sometimes I lose track of who's living or dead; the dead with all the humor and the patience born out of access to eternity don't always raise a hand unless the perfect question is asked correctly; this piece alone proves I'm not prone to perfection. When cold winds of winter shred the sun in my soul and thick clouds of night rage around me, when I reach out for warmth when I stagger and fall, why, tell me why are you sleeping? When I need reminding, a cue from the lights, when my life leaves me lonely and old, frightened of noise in the night; when the Ba'ansidhe beyond the doors of time blow cold visions through my soul, when I am left in shadows with no warmth in which to hide, I forget, tell me why are you sleeping? I have friends who are dead, I'm old enough, I have enemies who are alive, I've earned their enmity, there is security with both; living friendships are fragile, dead enemies wait. ©2003 by icebox |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
I need you to remind me, to throw a cue from the lights; it's just the time of my life that betrays me alone and frightened of noise in the night; it's just the winds outside the doors of time that blow cold visions through cracks in my soul to leave me in shadows with no where to hide, but I forget, tell me why are you sleeping? theyre just pretending to keep you dancing a bit longer. ![]() |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
That's some poem, and an excellent ending! Fragile, yes!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox "When the cold winds of winter blow the sun from my soul and thick clouds of night swirl around me, when I reach out for warmth when I stagger and fall, why, tell me why are you sleeping?" I know your warmth, even in winter...but every body must sleep....I guess timing is everything, some times...most times! ![]() |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"why, tell me why are you sleeping?" So I can dream of them, of course. ![]() ![]() ![]() I wish I could have your baby. *laughing* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and I could be that friend, yes? |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
chilling thought, that the enemy awaits |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
lol Karen... I have had similar thoughts. I want to close my eyes and understand him completely. Icy, you are the most fascinating man. *kiss* "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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