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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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Oh you so nigh... Speak to me not And I so sole You so long sought Leave me today And I say naught But see today I just forgot To your delight A kiss you got Juju -Say I think I used naught wrong what do you guys think? Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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EverRuss Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 66Indiana |
lol i dont know if you did or not but i liked the poem, it was clever. It was a big play on words and i liked it If my poems could talk they would mean more than the words Russell [This message has been edited by EverRuss (04-03-2005 03:00 AM).] |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thank you Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I dunno either but good write |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
naught is just an archaic form of nothing, so i think you used it right. anyway, nice write. -majnu |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thank you for the replies. TRhank you Manju for this confermation. Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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