Open Poetry #35 |
inspiration |
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
In a surge it comes, like the pump of air, filling things deflated, it trickles rainlike, off a leaky pipe and pours within the pores, a hand of fingers that spread the answer within the tightened glove, the ink between the dotted lines, casting color on blank pages, just when you thought you were alive, you realize you were dead and now your draw your first breath, the newborn's 'look at me' cry. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"it trickles rainlike, off a leaky pipe and pours within the pores, a hand of fingers that spread the answer within the tightened glove," Awesome images...wonderful write Michele. Much enjoyed the read as always. Hugs~Nancy For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Love this Michelle - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang girl! write on! |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Touching....hard and fast |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I always enjoy the way you colour the page mxx and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
nodding in agreement inspiration is like that raindrop trickle |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
yep! just like dat |
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