Open Poetry #35 |
Another Night Passes (repost) |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Another Nite Passes ~ Linda L. Dowd ~ Hazy memories swirling in the gauzy mists of long ago. Fleeting images of horse-drawn buggy swiftly wending its way down the litter-strewn streets. The stillness of the night is broken by the furious pounding of hooves upon the cobblestones. Clop, clop. Clop, clop. Clop, clop... Sounds that forever echo in the recesses of my unsettled mind. Putrid scents assail my nose as the hot, summer's night gives rise to the putrefaction of refuse and human waste that cover the lane ways. Lamplights are dim and far between, offering little illumination to light up the way. Contents of belly threaten to spew with the violent rocking of the caleche. There is a tangible sense of urgency. We must hurry! Faster! Faster! Faster!... Why? Where? Who? When? *** ...another night passes by, but still no answers... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel A lovely why, enjoyed. |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"Clop, clop. Clop, clop. Clop, clop... Sounds that forever echo in the recesses of my unsettled mind." I hear them this day, too. Greatly enjoyed this read. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i often wonder whos driving who? made me think here |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I was taken upon an unexpected ride by this - it makes a great metaphor - Hugs - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T. ~ I'm glad you enjoyed it! I suppose it was more enjoyable to read it than to have dreamt it ~ or lived it! lol Sweet Dreams! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Janette! It was good to hear from you! Long time no see! Yes, that clop clopping has a way of staying with me ~ from one lifetime to the next! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Goddess ~ Yes, you are the phyllum of Goddesses that are not only beautiful ~ but they think! lol Love & God/dess Light, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
vandana ~ Thank you, mountain flower! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Susan ~ As the saying goes, "Always keep them guessing!" ~ I do believe that should be a motto of yours! lol Linda |
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