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April Fool
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April Fool |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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Damp Cold Rain The weather’s unfaithful To April The masts Of ships Have no sails Tied up to docks in the harbor The fog horn sound Seems lost itself Barren limbs On wind blown trees Just when I think There’ll be no poem— A flight of sparrows Thunders by |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Very nice Huan..the "Fool" part of the poem was subliminal yet noticeable...i think...  Very nice |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The fog horn sound Seems lost itself This poem has such aural appeal... I love the mood these lines convey... and the ending of thundering sparrows! *S* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I always enjoy you |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Very nicely done. Nothing lends itself to poetry like the sea. Excellent. Bob |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Haun Yi A poet's senses should always be open in case a poem flies by. Yours obviously are. Enjoyed this!! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
" I can only be fooled once. the second time I fool you" |
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