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D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2005-03-31 04:34 PM

I want to write from mountain air.
Full of wildflower fragrances,
Dancing upon my words imagery,
That the sunrise, seeds them in you,
Implanting the free spited illusion,
Living inside its creative independence.

Clouds of thoughts floating free,
Meditating on their time travels.
An inner spirit climbs the sky
Taking on the eagle’s vision.
Scanning horizon of enlightenment,
Landscape of one’s own wilderness.

Here the sounds play into your mind,
Levitating the soul in contentment.
Harmony blessed creative environment,
Releasing the melody of one’s words,
Upon the canvas of written paint strokes,
Merging illusion of verbal magic.

Rivers rush upon nature’s highway,
Boulders clinging to edges of gravity.
Trees cracking voids of determination,
Diminutive fawn tracing mother’s steps.
Shading branches of sunburn luminance,
Dreams rushing inside out of a poet.

Foliage of peace and tranquility, here
You are the master of your universe.
Set free to explore your own limits.
No boundaries deterring mind waves.
Beach resilient feelings of contemplation,
Rushing upon a pen and paper.

D.Lester
Somewhere in America not on company time 03/30/05 ©
The Terminated Free Spirited Poet

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-03-31 07:37 PM

I think we could all use a little mountain air

excellent writing!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2005-04-01 02:03 AM

"Rivers rush upon nature’s highway,
Boulders clinging to edges of gravity.
Trees cracking voids of determination"

I have often felt like that boulder.
Enjoyed the imagery and the connectedness to the real world.
(terminated?)

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

3 posted 2005-04-01 02:50 AM

Yes I agree; we could all use a little mountain air these days! I love the imagery as well in this poem!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2005-04-01 06:06 AM

Clouds of thoughts floating free,
Meditating on their time travels.

lovely words and thoughts and ~smiling~ at your "not on company time"

M

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2005-04-01 07:25 AM

I want to write from mountain air.
Full of wildflower fragrances,
Dancing upon my words imagery,
That the sunrise, seeds them in you,
Implanting the free spited illusion,
Living inside its creative independence.

I believe in this outstanding poem, you already have
Simply georgous! A pleasure ride through the mind of compassion

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