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choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

0 posted 2005-03-31 09:58 AM

Even the snowfields burn
in the light of the full moon,
blazing chalk white-
through the open window
deep into my longing heart

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2005-03-31 10:09 AM

What you express through your longing heart is so poetic!

EA

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2005-03-31 10:10 AM

choshi

Your vision is very unique...Although I don't live where there is snow, I can see how snow would seem this way. Thank you for the beautiful poem this morning.

Dautz Write
Member

since 2004-11-16

Posts 96

3 posted 2005-03-31 10:10 AM

NICE!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2005-03-31 10:36 AM

Very very nice write..
So much enjoyed!!
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

Verve
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

5 posted 2005-03-31 10:37 AM

Great imagery.. loved it

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

6 posted 2005-03-31 10:38 AM

Oh yeah, even the snowfields. I love the images in this one-fresh and original.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2005-03-31 10:37 PM

Even the snowfields burn
in the light of the full moon,
blazing chalk white-
through the open window
deep into my longing heart

the biting cold
no blanket to warm
the piercing need

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2005-04-01 02:20 AM

Cool snow reflections.
Lights dance over the edges.
Warming hearts and souls.
*

enjoyed!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

9 posted 2005-04-01 07:52 AM

beatiful

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2005-04-01 11:52 AM

nice poem

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

11 posted 2005-04-01 05:30 PM

What vivid imagery, Choshi...
a very compelling thought!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2005-04-01 05:35 PM

so descriptive in such few words

love this!

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