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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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hey just shakin the cobwebs off here... thanks for reading. "It has to be locked in a cage" That's what the caretaker said. And sometimes I think that's what they'll say about me. I have a friend called hurt and I made a t-shirt with my hands and a computer. I pretend whoever tries to read what I've written on it searches my heart like a box of warped and worn out records. But you know... that's the joke the really fine print because if I'd tattoed my head -help Me- they'd wish I was dead. But not looking for this I found a niche. Amidst the salt on my shirt I wrote these words on my heart Now i'm a poet. [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (03-31-2005 10:26 AM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Trippin' to the far side of town are we? Oh goodie! I've missed your whimsy, Wally~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You've always been a fine poet...  Welcome home, WOW... |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Hello Walt my friend !! Long time no read. This one is going directly into my library. Hugs, Chris "The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze." |
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Dautz Write Member
since 2004-11-16
Posts 96 |
Cleverly written. Especially liked the part about the tattoo on the head, "Help me!" Too bad people can be that way. Dautz |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
excellent thoughts - I really like the conclusion - S If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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