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RMW
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0 posted 2005-03-29 08:28 AM


The Neighbor Lady's Pool

A siren night, the moon at full,
the air laden with moisture
and the scent of daphne
oozing in through the screened windows,
I tiptoed down the cool, oak stairs,
crossed the carpet then eased the doors
that opened french-like onto the patio.
Stepping out, I paused and stood for a moment
while my young fingers reassured themselves
around the deep keel of my sailboat.
A wall of stone ran dark and long
between my mother's rose garden
and the swimming pool
that entirely took up
the adjacent back 'yard'. Through the thorns
I crept towards it. Felt its height.
Reached up the sloop. Then, careful of the sails
while placing it on top,
climbed after it
despite the coarseness
molesting through my pajamas.

RMW


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-03-29 08:33 AM



Oh, the desires of young men...
and their lady sloops...

LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-03-29 09:27 AM


this sounded like a floating island in your own back yard...

enjoyed, and so happy I didn't miss this....

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2005-03-29 10:09 AM


What a delightfully, fanciful reading experience! I just loved it, Bob!


Linda

RMW
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4 posted 2005-03-29 10:20 AM


Sunshine, Lee and Linda .... Thank you very much for taking a moment. My poetry owes much to the likes of you. Bob
Martie
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5 posted 2005-03-29 10:54 AM


Hi Bob

Thanks for the wink and the smile this morning!  

Martie
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6 posted 2005-12-25 02:03 PM


I miss your poetry, Bob....and hope you grace us with more, soon!!  Merry Christmas!  
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