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Guiding Light
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Guiding Light |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
As stormy seas toss ship about, His yearning heart in pain; Somewhere out in the darkest night Her light shines not in vain. For in his eyes a flame of hope His dreams on waves are borne; They softly whisper to the ship Of future not forlorn. The whispers echo to his heart To follow painted dreams - And steer his ship into her bay On waves of crimson streams. CG |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Like it a lot Dave |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful...wonderful imagery. Very much enjoyed. Hugs~Nancy For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
CG, you write what every woman would wish to have written for her alone!  EA |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Yes..."Still" shinning...love those crimson waves...  You make my wishes come true!  ~Love Thy Lady "Let me not to the marriage of true minds Admit impediments; love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (03-29-2005 02:31 AM).] |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Dave, Nancy - thank you for the kind words. CG Linda - thank you, I am humbled by your words, for if mine should reach thus...the poet’s intent has been met. Though, of course, in inspiration, and dedication, there can only be One...  CGMy Lady - thank you for the waves... Thy wish....is my command...Thy Knight |
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