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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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we traded our jackets like the rain with the sand when the buffalo made his scent path the mountain beyond sky brought us a river and held our shadows under til we were the deep words of the spirit walkers I carved a god in stone and gave it the breath I had dreamed for you on the nights of lone love when hands were our warriors and the arrowgrass quivered when the maker of moan wounds was but a winesmith's mouth bleeding his laughter over shallowing water and we were shimmer stone diamonds _______________________ dark |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
the mountain beyond sky brought us a river and held our shadows under til we were the deep words of the spirit walkers I carved a god in stone and gave it the breath I had dreamed for you on the nights of lone love when hands were our warriors and the arrowgrass quivered when the maker of moan wounds was but a winesmith's mouth bleeding his laughter over shallowing water and we were shimmer stone diamonds ===================================== OH YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!!! shimmer stone diamonds thats a perfect define of your poetry. awesome write of rites poet sir.  Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom Precious rhythm you are my guide These days are sacred ... my heart is humble Oh my warrior ... show me the shining light ~Walela~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Upon visits to the ocean, when the sun is shining on the water, I see those shimmer stone diamonds I carved a god in stone and gave it the breath I had dreamed for you on the nights of lone love when hands were our warriors Beautiful…simply amazing! In exploring consciousness, are we looking for vital facts about consciousness or for enlightening lived experience? Or both? which is love... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
when hands were our warriors and the arrowgrass quivered ~*~ Another Monday brew... good stuff here, DS |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dark, to my mind, you just outdid yourself! ~ and that is saying mucho! I'd like to save this to my personal trove of poetic treasures!  A very impressive and soul-touching piece of spirit writing. Love & Light, EA |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
D- the images are sensual - mystic - and bring about many thougths in my mind - I catch my breath -  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
cant believe i didnt see this one~ nice~ My spirit will rise |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
damn D, I almost missed this one... and that just woulnd'ta been right at all..  Loved this, and those closing lines? groovy baby.....lol... Well done sir.. I really want to care, |
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