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BirdeeB Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 106USA |
So small so tiny it doesn’t fit so well It needs a place to hide It wants that second chance It may fear That tiny touch of salt In the wound is all it needs To make it heed The feeling of always Have to save it's Graces mmmm... Smell the mourning glory Feel the ray of light touch Its skin Feeling so slated Somewhat under rated Exposed almost Vulnerable Jaded, convicted of the Action. |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
how do you describe my feelings? lol good job~ Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Can I say welcome home? I am not familiar with your poetry. This a fine expression of a healing feeling. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
welcome back  |
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BirdeeB Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 106USA |
Thank you its been a long time since i've really actually sit down and written something this one took a little while..thanks again |
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