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Open Poetry #35
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2005-03-26 09:29 AM


The sun creates
a sea of light
on my kitchen table

and I
from above
like God look down
on what the sun has done

and think it
good
© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2005-03-26 09:37 AM

Huan Yi,
If you see light in the morning you are ahead of the game. LOL Good thoughts.
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-03-26 10:56 AM

This make me smile..softly.
Very nicely penned John.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul
vandana
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Member Patricius
since 1999-10-22
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USA
3 posted 2005-03-26 10:57 AM

enjoyed
Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2005-03-27 12:37 PM

one of your best
Drauntz
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5 posted 2007-05-01 12:35 PM

beautiful mind.
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