Open Poetry #35 |
A Picket Fence |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
A Picket Fence For years I sat a picket fence On why’s to me that made no sense Reflecting thoughts of sin and crime That held me in the flow of time And in the rapids of each bend I surely thought this is the end But time has many twists and turns Full of whirl pools spins and yearns Its then I turned to mining skills To mine the gold that sage did spill To salve the heat of torments cry To wash the sigh from out my I But sage I found to be a stage Of words that played upon a page Each one a candle lit of light To brighten up the dark of night But night still holds obscurity Unless night is eternity? |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You wound this one round back to the end's beginning, Sy...a perfect circle of one's thought process from the time that one can... It's another So...duly libraried, with lights! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
caught you this morning I'm up doing laundry glad I stayed awake |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Drawing circles in time is just like blowing bubbles. passing, Sweet dreams sweety. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Of words that played upon a page Each one a candle lit of light To brighten up the dark of night But night still holds obscurity Unless night is eternity? Sometimes it can feel like one. *S* Science has never explained how time doesn't move when we're miserable... and flies during moments of heaven! LOL I like this so very much, my friend... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sy your words are the candles lighting up the night. Much enjoyed. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Thank you sweet and have a wonderful day. scorpio Thank you my friend and you are a friend. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
But time has many twists and turns Full of whirl pools spins and yearns Oh my, it certainly does. I wonder if time ever notices how quickly it is moving? Love this Seymour. Easter hugs, Chris "The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Easter hugs back sweety. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"But time has many twists and turns Full of whirl pools spins and yearns" Oh my does it ever Sy! Hope you're having a great weekend and a blessed Easter to you and yours. ~Bunny hugs & tea, Nancy~ For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, And Bunny hugs back to you, with a |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana Thank you dear. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Its then I turned to mining skills To mine the gold that sage did spill To salve the heat of torments cry To wash the sigh from out my I But sage I found to be a stage Of words that played upon a page Each one a candle lit of light To brighten up the dark of night But night still holds obscurity Unless night is eternity? ============================= Since you are the sage that displays your wisdom upon the page ... I know, that you know...your poetry IS your eternity. *ww* It's only words and words are all I have to take your heart away. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy I know you'll understand how hard it is to reply to you after JM has...so I'll just agree with her and give you a |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You caught me with my pants down LOL WW Martie I'll accept both and throw a back. |
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