Wolves, Clocks . . . . haiku

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Open Poetry #35

Wolves, Clocks . . . . haiku

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

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0 posted 2005-02-16 11:37 AM

wolves tilting skyward

like the hands of seven clocks;

the chimes of midnight.

Martie

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1 posted 2005-02-16 11:40 AM

Ed....Oh I like that....I can see that wolf profile in moon talk...but not sure of significance of number 7...but, hey, it doesn't matter!

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

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2 posted 2005-02-16 11:52 AM

Interesting juxtaposition......~P

Snow

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desert flower looking for rain

3 posted 2005-02-16 11:56 AM

in my life wolves have always been a negative... however, this.... intrigues me, i like that you did that.

"i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly"

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

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Louisiana

4 posted 2005-02-16 12:44 PM

There are poems that make the day slip away as they take you to another place... though your words are few, the impact is great... this is one of those poems... and the images it leaves makes me smile.

passing shadows
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displaced

5 posted 2005-02-16 01:05 PM

what a scene

iliana
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6 posted 2005-02-17 11:16 PM

I was going to say what PS said.... saw it!

.....jo

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