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my fiesta in breeze
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my fiesta in breeze |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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like the ease of the trapeze the swift-flip of an acrobat the wayward laughter of clowns and the raucous cry of tigers you are like these and you are my fiesta in breeze a carnival in the pit of my dreams and oh how i hold gentle the blue-flamed sufferings that swell in your great still eyes and oh how i try to will movement from them i want for myself your trembling the thunders and the lightning’s the salt and the sweat from the gods and goddesses that were born with you and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you ~Buckingham/Nicks [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (03-25-2005 12:38 AM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
ill have the leftovers when youre done with this fine young cannibal |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Inked? "she drives me crazy, like no one else" heh, fine young cannibals..um nevermind. Thanks so much  m and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you ~Buckingham/Nicks |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree Such passion, movement and flame you write. As always, you amaze me!  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
Your writing is still divine! This was truly a treat. I have been working a TON and haven't frequented near as much as I would like. It just kills me to miss all these great posts. Your writes have always been among my favorites...something I have missed. This was delicious and engaging. Your cinematic approach always leaves my jaw on the floor. Passionate and perfect! Your poetic friend, Kevin |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
absolutely astonishingly written... the flow, images, sincerity of emotion...whimsical...lovely Maree |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you never ever cease to amaze...brilliant star you are, incredible poetess |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"fiesta in breeze" very cool... makes me want to go get some...um...cotton candy? *eg* "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
my fiesta in breeze ~*~ You brought to mind a magnificent immediate display of color and dance... You seem to write effortlessly... and yet, I know... it's not that easy. Love, Mama K |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark, A tweak is a tweak. Enjoyed |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
damn Maree.. you always amaze me..  |
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