LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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2005-03-24
12:44 PM
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Heavy laden air, with calloused ocean breezes Gaze at notable recall, first dawn maturity Traffic jams insulting one another Overweight highlights, speeding through strands of romance Lofty illusions, sticking to mind interruptions Like there’s not enough time, to finish a hello Less preachy, raping the daughter of Galileo
Motion picture hard-on’s! Bulldozing down any home with boxing gloves Taxing sorely, an oath of Venice Cadavers left, broken bones of briefness Shocked wide eyed gapes For the sake of opium dreams Around the Block in 90 Days, Stepping off the heartbreak train?
Collectors of notched belts & disease Even Rome wasn’t built in a day All the while, beauty secrets of stars Become European anti-aging facts Powerful mantal pieces of modern day classics Blinking neon signs with breast implanted sonar
An itinerary for, unfaithful housewives with sightless vision Drowning in their careers of finding romantic Within the cast, crew and photos, of the rich and famous Does the “rock n’ roll” heart disappear with the First strands of grey hair? While gothic narrative writers, go for the jugular Of inspirational fiction...dinner and a movie
Oh those eye rolls when my parents spoke the same Not knowing what lay in store, and laughing Society???? Priorities??? Prostituting everyone, like a pimp with a hoar Upscale living, fast cars... and beautiful woman!
[This message has been edited by LeeJ (03-25-2005 06:37 AM).]
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Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
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2005-03-24
01:11 PM
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LeeJ Reminscence or fantasy? Enjoyed and good morning.
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
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2005-03-24
01:37 PM
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LeeJ
An impressed, wow!
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Ericc
Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
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2005-03-24
07:19 PM
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Martie said it best...yes...impressive!
Eric
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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
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2005-03-25
12:11 PM
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NIce...James
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Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
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2005-03-25
03:36 PM
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thanks!
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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
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2005-03-26
07:11 PM
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Wow! You sure do have a way called stiking! Hugs, TD
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DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917
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2005-03-26
10:00 PM
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Lee J
I read the words but this is an American.
It reminded me of "I heard it in the Daily News".
Thanks for the words
Dave
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garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
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Florida, USA
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2005-03-26
10:33 PM
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LeeJ, I love your description of the scenes in your mind. Thanks for sharing . Hugs and Happy Easter,
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JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
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2005-03-29
04:22 PM
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“Collectors of notched belts & disease Even Rome wasn’t built in a day All the while, beauty secrets of stars Become European anti-aging facts Powerful mantal pieces of modern day classics Blinking neon signs with breast implanted sonar”
Sounds like Hollywood for sure. But they all win awards, don’t they? And surely deserved…too.
Enjoyed this one very much, Lee J.
JL
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