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Perpetual Valentine
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Perpetual Valentine |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I am lost unto the words Slipped the surface to the depths Moved by circles of the oar Stillness to stillness In the tide a pocket watch Daring look into the storm Letting go of fate, quiet in the wait Trusting what is true I am lost unto the words In a peaceful life from inside out To accept reality as fact I will always love you Rounded banks in merrily Tears flow rivers happily Moonlight blankets warm beside your dreams Love is rarely ever what convention deems I will always love you so it seems Copyright Kkh 02/13/04 |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The circle is unending. A very good poem of heart, this is. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
lovely thoughts here - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
"... so it seems!" And surely the "perpetual Valentine" is the best of all! In the stillness treasures last! Beautiful verses. Love, Margherita  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I wish I could write like this maybe one day |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wonderful! Eric |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May your every day be like one "Perpetual Valentine". A lovely write, TD!  EA |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great write! ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
lost onto the words when words are not suffice perpetual yes it's all there,written in the stars |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Love is rarely ever what convention deems" == what a line! So true. Enjoyed this, truly. Happy Valentine's Day, Kathleen. ....jo |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
K.. May you be blessed with happiness and love, with kindness and wealth, with wisdom and patience..through all of your life. If the Sandman could make dreams be true, he would...or I would kick his butt. (After I rehang the door, sheesh) |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
TD, Happy Valentine's Day! It is so good to have a minute to stop by again to read your writing! I don't think there has ever been a time that I've read one of your poems that I haven't repeated one of your lines over and over again. The imagery--you know! Well, the line for my day: "Moved by circles of the oar" So much can be interpretted within those six words! miscellanea |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I know this... quiet silk slips the oar in moonlight beautiful Kathleen |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is very beautiful, Kathleen. Hugs,  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
every single line was articulated through the mind's eye...wonderful music you write |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Simply put: EXCELLENT! More-over: Wonderful. Enjoyed this write very much. JL |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
am lost unto the words In a peaceful life from inside out To accept reality as fact I will always love you pure poetry in motion excellent! |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
So sweet and so sentamental. I loved your words! Good immages. Keep it up. |
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