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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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Everyone else is asleep. The weekend for late night maneuvers or movies, the mornings lost in bed. Out of context with the time, three men load up their cars that cough, like camels being stirred; the dawn sung in by doves. |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
amazing how you could paint vivid images with brief, striking lines  |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful. top ten best. "the dawn sung in by doves." nothing passes the beauty of this |
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