Open Poetry #35 |
Did You Know You're My Hero? |
Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Noah made this challenge just over 2 years ago, and I thought it was good enough to bring back... Besides ,I hear the song that inspired this the other day and it always reminds me of my children who don't care that I'm a rock/wrestling star. /pip/Forum7/HTML/000537.html Did you ever know you're my hero? As I stand on this stage All eyes ablaze with the hopes Brought on by the star of the show Their cheers, voices raised Straining to send their love my way Yet you don't care It is just a game to you Having known me since before the lights Of fame touched my face You care not Of the games I have to play Staying on top You just don't care For that you have my love Deep and eternal With the loving thanks Greatful For the solid ground you provide The earth I remain anchored to As my head floats through the clouds With a simple word Daddy You keep me real Dedicated to my kids In the wooden chair Beside my window I wear a face born in the falling rain |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
and have always deserved that title (Daddy) *smile* |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Very touching, Ringo! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks for bringing this back |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Yes, it is good enough to bring back. Your response is way more than good enough to read. Thanks for sharing it. |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Thank you to all for reading this little scribble and for being kind enough to respond. It felt good to be able to be creative again. lol In the wooden chair |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Sweet stuff,,,,,,but um,,,when did you become a wrasslin star? Last IIIIIIIIIIII saw,,you was a crazy wrasslin manager,,,hmmmmm |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ringo, you are more than a star ~ You're a loving and caring Dad! I enjoy the earthy realism to your poetry. This poem will surely be treasured by your kids of their Dad. EA |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"For the solid ground you provide" and we all need it. and you deserve it. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is wonderful Ringo. So glad that I didn't let it slip by. Hugs, Chris "The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze." |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Once again, I thank you all for your kind words. It is bringing a smile to my fave, because I JUST got off the phone with my kids (both of them) right before I logged on. Thanks again, and a thousand hugs to all |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
this leaves me with a warm smile - and a warm heart - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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