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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-03-22 06:29 AM

sometimes you just unravel me
and I love the feel
of my threads
loose ended
and your hands

pretending
as the wind
to toy with them

not on purpose tugging
but just pretending to
to get my attention
and make me want more
than just your fingers

and what they can capture
your lips perhaps
and the sharpened edge

of your part way smile
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dark

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-03-22 06:34 AM

pretending
as the wind
to toy with them

~*~

You do provide
a smile a day...

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2005-03-22 09:53 AM

"and the sharpened edge

of your part way smile"

Love that image, DS!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2005-03-22 10:13 AM

Mmmm - you tug at my strings this morning -

Susan

btw - kitty kats love to play with strings

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2005-03-22 10:17 AM

You know I love it when you make me smile..

thanks for the smile babe. Slow hugs this morning to you.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2005-03-22 10:37 AM

~~*~~
I'm Standing on a bridge
I'm waitin in the dark
I thought that you'd be here by now
Theres nothing but the rain
~~**~~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2005-03-22 11:35 AM

nice

Indigo
Senior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 602

7 posted 2005-03-22 03:17 PM

she often felt
the frayed fabric
of his heart

tickling her chin
making her mouth
reach for the wisps
of cotton-candy love

only to have them
dissolve
in sticky strands
that left her

licking her lips
long into the night.

Indigo

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

8 posted 2005-03-22 03:22 PM

smiling wide

a

indeed

mxx

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

9 posted 2005-03-23 07:16 AM

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

soul drifter
Senior Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 711
Colorado

10 posted 2005-03-23 07:51 AM

Wonderful...enjoyed this immensly.

"Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

11 posted 2005-03-23 08:54 AM

beautifully done, as always....your a blueberrie muffin on a rainy day...

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

12 posted 2005-03-23 04:50 PM

and what they can capture
your lips perhaps
and the sharpened edge

of your part way smile

Very nice, DS~
Sad though, when a warm smile unravels, and parts ways.

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