Open Poetry #35 |
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Sapphire Sea's |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside ![]() |
String the stars in white gold clasped like a bracelet set in sapphire sea's let the moon linger sweet until it burns with a glaze to a beautiful phase tasting the glare of a splendor that teases lapping like silk through our hands. |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is lovely!!! I needed this peaceful beauty... thank you! *S* |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
I love the moon , stars and the sea and you portrayed the scene most beautifully Hope |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you just made the moon melt in the sky's embrace, very nice touch of blonde on blonde |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
this reminded me of complete and total serenity dear Bluesy gal... simply lovely Lori, hugs coming at ya! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I see a slip of a girl at the shore, straining to wear sea glints... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lori, it sounds like you are writing of, and from, a very beautiful place. Your words were so calming that I am certain you must have lowered my heartbeat. Thank you for this beautiful poem that you have gifted your readers with! ![]() I do so enjoy it when the lovely of you spills forth. Happy springtime hugs, Linda ![]() |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Such lovely images here Lori.. Very much enjoyed the read. Hugs~Nancy For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
there is such a peace in this how beautiful this gift! hugsss you miss seeing you here.... ![]() ~~*~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
precious |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Absolutely Lovely Ms Blues ![]() and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thanks to all you lovely ladies for your gracious replies. I feel honored to be sharing the same page with you. |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
More than poem, this is a gentle picture of the one who wrote it. I like that very much. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lori? Thank you so very much for the wonderful inspiration. /pip/Forum92/HTML/001226.html |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
oh boy, I'm getting really homesick for the sea...this was exquisite....delightful...and made me long for the ocean.... Hugs |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lori...I thought I'd replied to this....my mind must be slipping...it's very beautiful...I can see why Karilea was so inspired! ![]() |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Ahhh shux, thanks so much. Wishing you all a very Happy Easter Sunday. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Happy Easter, Lori ![]() M |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thanking you two, too! |
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