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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

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0 posted 2005-03-21 07:25 PM

Even as your voice slips
past the ears of my
restraint.

I hear you whisper...

"It's just one more thing to
let go of."

And I smile for this moment held in
your embrace.

Slowly letting go.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2005-03-21 07:27 PM

This one more thing is so poignant!

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2005-03-21 07:35 PM

Even as...

this whisper holds...

magic.

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises...

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2005-03-21 08:10 PM

Eric, I wish I had the ability to write
such powerful "feel" is something so short,
yet so precise.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2005-03-21 08:31 PM

Exquisite as always!

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2005-03-22 04:54 AM

And I smile for this... yes! *S*

Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

6 posted 2005-03-22 09:46 AM

"Even as your voice slips
past the ears of my
restraint."

Excellent!

K

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

7 posted 2005-03-22 10:39 AM

the whisper is soft and held.....beautiful!

~~*~~
I'm Standing on a bridge
I'm waitin in the dark
I thought that you'd be here by now
Theres nothing but the rain
~~**~~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2005-03-22 11:23 AM

slowly letting go

yes, that's what it's about

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2005-03-23 04:16 PM

And I smile for this moment held in
your embrace.

This is so sadly beautiful.
Is it just me who wipes away a tear~

I really love your words, Ericc~

froggy
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since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

10 posted 2005-03-25 08:50 PM

Sweet.
enjoyed the read.

:-)

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

11 posted 2005-03-26 07:06 PM

The best hugs last beyond the moment of release, don't they?
A keeper.
TD

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

12 posted 2005-03-26 07:07 PM

Lovely one Eric and thanks for your help.

regards

Dave

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

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Florida, USA

13 posted 2005-03-26 10:21 PM

Beautiful, as always, Eric.
Hugs and Happy Easter,

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

14 posted 2005-03-26 11:14 PM

Ah yes, and it is indeed a luxury if you can slowly let go...James

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