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Open Poetry #35

Hammond

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-03-19 10:50 PM

Insistent
the soft tapping
on castle walls

Through narrow slits
glaring down

to see a courage
with frightened eyes

threatening the Spartan lord
with flowers

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

1 posted 2005-03-20 10:09 AM

I never cease to be amazed at the depth and dimension you manage, with such a very few words.

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Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2005-03-20 12:00 PM

John

I agree with Ed up there. It is not easy to be profound in so few words, but you always seem to pull it off.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2005-03-21 08:35 PM

What more can one say than "Ditto"....you
gave us an image, so clearly seen...so
easily.

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