Open Poetry #35 |
The Rising Crest |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I rose to crest of lofted wave the master bearing on his slave. As foam did touch my fingertips and the thought of you... Left there, that one kiss. Lingering so, each breath then shared as passion flowed and touches dared. Feeling each curve, a lofted peak... A journey entwined, of lover’s sleek. Left to dry upon sandy shores as minds dreamt of sultry explores. Seeing each step that ventured away, to come soon again....another day. Rhythmic the rise and fall of each as travels sought the watery breech... Filling each hand with shells a few. As fires rekindled burned anew. And as the set of stars then hailed the rapture of two breaths exhaled, a sigh brought out the wandering moon before the fiddle, the cow or spoon. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
This is still very understated But it is all in the mind Or maybe The mind is all in it Dave |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You weave the best moments of life with fantasy and fairy tales... and do so in such a way I'm smiling before the little dog laughs. *S* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome ending! |
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