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A Little Here
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A Little Here |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Little Here A little here a little there It came to me from everywhere Bit by bit it made a boat that Float me over the living moat The whispers of the time of day The colors of the sky in play The green within the green of grass The birds and butterflies alas It took some time to make a dent And much of grime to wear a vent But finally the sun came through To show my eyes another view And now I see the world in awe The Eden that was made once more I found it where it’s always been The core within each thing of mean I cannot say what others will For time has yet to send the bill |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sir sy, you do have a method in your madness, I enjoy reading your verve |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark, Don't know about the method but the madness is true. LOL |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Sy, I always see the sun through your eyes, and I enjoy the view through your writing. K |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It took some time to make a dent And much of grime to wear a vent But finally the sun came through To show my eyes another view ~*~  And I always will!    |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Seymour, I have always enjoyed reading your poems. Thank you for sharing them. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I found it where it’s always been The core within each thing of mean ========================== Mother Nature is smiling at you for that couplet... so am I   your wisdom rhymes are like morning sunshine. *ww*    one drop, an ocean ... one seed, the forest ... one leaf, the wind ... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! Yet another beautiful write from your magical pen. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, yes, Mr. Tree, you do indeed see the forest!  Loveya, EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the morning would not be complete without you |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I love the ending of this... may the fee be small.*S* |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
A little here A little there a little more for everywhere?  Oh why not? anything for our sy!I have missed you my cuddle bear! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kahlil A beautiful comment, thank you. Sunshine, You are always another view. Hugs SmartChick I thank you for reading them. JM You make a Dragon sigh Nancy Hugs and tea from you are a delight. Earth Angel From here they look like Palm trees. LOL passing, You are a doll. suthern For both of us. Hugs serenity And I missed you my boquet of liloc. |
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