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A Dying
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A Dying |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
In heydays lost A dying was Royal (King, Queen in any order, any sex) And closed loop defined control Without dynamic stimulous To sooth dynamic souls A weak self-destruction Populated by enclaves Encouraged by ensouls To enclose a world Into a hole In the belief Fools are slaves And nothing is better than whole |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...wonderful lines Dave, with a truly great closing. Eric |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"In the belief Fools are slaves And nothing is better than whole" I know that's right! Excellent write Dave. JL  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
wow! right on the mark~ |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Ericc Wow...wonderful lines Dave, with a truly great closing. Eric Thanks Eric but I dont class it with some of the words you write. Dave JL "In the belief Fools are slaves And nothing is better than whole" I know that's right! Excellent write Dave. JL Thanks JL - I think you are being a bit kind here. Dave MGROVES wow! right on the mark~ Thanks Marsha Dave |
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