Open Poetry #34 |
Plain Jane Dining |
Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I’m a plain Jane kinda girl Words like meat and mashed potatoes Set upon the table with home baked bread No Coeur don blue with hidden treasures And a fancy French name No enigma under glass Or exotic fruits set aflame Just salt and pepper simple Though I wish I had more spice ‘twould be lovely to be a gourmet A connoisseur of composition An author of lyrical ambrosia A Ventnor of the finest rhyme But alas – ‘tis not so As I sit down to my burger and beer And sometimes . . . A hearty casserole Upon a checkered table cloth For Joe and Jane and Jack But for once, Just for once-- I’d love to set forth fine dining Upon linen cloth That set mouths to watering And minds to wondering It looks just beautiful – But what the heck is it? s.a.t. Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, know well of this...so often I see a write that makes me think...I wish I could write like that...and too often when I attempt...it just doesn't look right...and I go back to hamburgers and beer... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I could go for a lady like you... _______________________________ even the fancy places have gum on the bottom of the table..did a survey once..was under one of them tables playing around and some gorilla drug me out..said his wife was blushing..so I did a twenty minute presentation on gum products and the abuse in american society..he even looked under the table to see if I was accurate.. ______________ true story number 268 |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Ah, Barry - if you are hamburgers and beer - I am in good company - thanks dear Sir- Dark - you can sit at my table anytime - and the story - crack me up - hugs - you Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yep, I know exactly what you mean. here's mine...lol /main/forumdisplay.cgi?action=displayarchive&number=70&topic=001566 |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Yes Wranx - exactly - perhaps rather than the masters, we are the impressionists and contemporaries - maybe a slavador dali or picasso rather than a rembrant or m. angelo- Thanks for your reply and hugs to you - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
This poem is a poem readers goumet delight.. was delicious....yum! An old saying is that the way to a mans heart is through his stomach (something like that) But it is ovious that another way is through the words of a good poem that falls on his eyes... enjoyed ------ice/ford ><> Come read to me some poem, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Enjoyed this treasure treat, Susan... it's fun to enjoy all tables! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
enjoyed this a good read for this early in the morning |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ah...yes. I feel this way about a lot of things, not just food. Give me simple over complicated! Enjoyed this very much Susan. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
You are making a mouth water here, especially with the home baked bread. Enjoyed this. e |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you friends, for my morning buffet of kind replies - I am pleased to have tickled your palates- hugs to you all this morning- Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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