Open Poetry #34 |
The Dancer |
Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
I see you dancing in the rain With inner joy you can’t contain Till a shout breaks your fantasy And you shiver in lost ecstasy Yes I watch from darkness And see the change to sadness And cry with you in sorrow Struggling into tomorrow Gloom |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
painful yet beautiful at the same time. Very well done Proff. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Professor, Some excellent lines. " And cry with you in sorrow Struggling into tomorrow" |
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Catrina Member
since 2004-11-10
Posts 132 |
That call back to reality can be too much for some of us. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*understanding this* |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
When reality shouts at you, your smile is turned upside down. Well done! ~myheart~ Love is the poetry of the senses. ~Honoré de Balzac |
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