Open Poetry #34 |
A Puppets Pantomime |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
A Puppets Pantomime I am a puppets pantomime Dancing on the strings of time And from the be that I can see I sail upon an eon sea My anchorage a rove of clover Storing nectar passing over Yet putting extra in my store I know damn well can’t pass the door Sometimes I wish that I could fly Without a limit to the sky Fly beyond my shadows pall See horizons start and fall Sometimes I say I do not care A mind unschooled in eons wear And know that I am but a knit Dimensions that I would not fit So why do I still act the fool? And make these sounds of quiet pule Pule, to whimper |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah...now our Sy... please don't cry... [This message has been edited by Sunshine (11-12-2004 09:38 AM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
very well done Sey, good morning. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
A pleasure to have the time to read your well crafted words again Excellent as always Gloom |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I just can't imagine any strings on you. I see instead you being the puppet master guiding yourself through this life. Wonderful write and I even learned a new word. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Now you have sent me scrambling for my dictionary Sy! LOL. Excellent morning write but don't cry m'friend, you a puppet?...I think not! ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
master sy even puppets have a line with which they control the fingers of the puppetmaster |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love it when you whimper |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning to you, Sir Sonneteer! You be not a puppet ~ but puppeteer! Delighted as always am I to read, Your words as sweet as nectar mead. You are simply amazing! How do you keep this up! Day after day ~ Year after year! Books of your brilliant sonnets should be required reading for every literature course in every university ~ in every country! I can see your books being translated into hundreds of languages! ~ well, at least they should be!!! Love you lots, you know! EA |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
To soar and see what lies o'er yonder Is something that we all can ponder. Well done. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Gentle, Good morning sweet. Professor, LOL does that mean I get an A? Mark, Thank you my friend and have a wonderful day. Nancy, Well if I'm not a puppet, then maybe a lover? LOL Dark, Reverse osmosis, Good Idea. passing, Well I'm whimpering. Earth Angel, From your voice to Gods ear, you are a sweetheart. kayjay, Thank you for the beautiful comment. |
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