Open Poetry #34 |
My Grandmother's Psalm (repost from archives for Ed's Challenge) |
quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
My Grandmother's Psalm Silken rays of the sun rain down upon your face so sweetly calm. Soft, gentle breezes whisper your name as the autumn leaves echo your psalm. The days have disappeared into years and I have grown into a woman somehow; Though just a girl when you left this world I didn't realize the pain until now. Taking for granted the days we spent and the love you showered upon me. I never realized one day it would end and leave me only your memory. Gone are the days we used to share and the ones we had yet to come; like the three great-grand daughters I've given you and now there's a great-great one. Thinking back on that cool November day when we gently placed you in the earth; wondering then if God even realized just what, to me, you were worth. I try to reflect and remember the days though all they ever bring me is pain; But your memories are all I have left to hold you close to my heart again. So many things were left unsaid and not expected from a young girl; But I want you to know "I love you grandma and to me you were my world." quatro |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
very soft and beautiful writing |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A very well expressed piece of yourself of someone so very dear to you...I think they, our grands were given to us that we might have something extra special to look back to from time to time...I know I do...and I still think of him...often. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
beautiful there will surely come a time when the memories will bring you joy for having had the time you did have and for experiencing the love she inspired in you Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
There is a sweet and gentle softness in your loving words of devotion to your grandmother's memory. Beautifully written and a pleasure to read. Love & Eternal Light, EA |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Gentle and good....the way this memory should be. Thanks for bringing it back for us. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
Beautiful work. *Allison* ~~~***~~~Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland~~~***~~~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Naome...this is a beautiful memory and hopefully one that has been passed on down to your children and their children... these are the poems of memories kept alive. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful heartfelt words. Hugs~Nancy ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh my.....this is precious |
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